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Monday, November 6, 2017

MY STORY NOT REALLY FINISHED

I dive into the water. Sunia then jumps off. We were jumping of a boat in the middle of  beach. Playing around. Then suddenly there was a rumble we quickly jump up onto the boat.  Thinking it was a earthquake. After a while we jump back in thinking it was just a minor earthquake. As we splash it rumbles just a little bit we still play around and swim far. Then out of nowhere i see something black I swim far and fast thinking it was a shark but it stood still so we carried on thinking that was a big amount of seaweed. Then Out of nowhere I saw the water sinking really really fast.


It was a black hole we quickly hopped on the boat and went all the way back to land the water nearly caught us. We quickly jumped up and ran and told everybody. Then the houses and the palm trees coconut trees started to get blown straight out from the roots. Like water going through a sink.everything was being demolished. Houses were being ripped and many more things like animals plants food and clothes.
Then sunias mom went to grab his little sister than she and her mom was sucked in and they were gone and nowhere to be seen. Sunia started crying like a baby. Then he started to try look for something to hide so he was going to be killed.Then we found a basement so we could not get sucked. The black hole keeped moving around like it had eyes and was looking for someone to suck in.We went around looking for something to get people to safety.then sunia dropped into a whole it was covered with house roof and had sand on top.


He spotted a shine he walked towards it was a screen and some controls.It looked like someone pressing buttons. sunia saw the person it looked like his mom.Except it was his aunty who they had a fight with before sunia ran to her and told her are you controlling the hole she smashed a bottle on his head he started to bleed I ran over to to see him but he died.So I ran from the area and go some police.They checked and she was gone.They then started to search she was controlling it from another area.She almost sucked everything up but then she sucked the house she was on then she fell to the floor and the controller broke .They then arrested her and threw her in a prison in the middle of an island sunia was then taken to the sea and dropped their to float until dust.



2 comments:

  1. THIS IS SUNIA THE ONE IN THE STORY

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  2. Hi David.

    As i'm sure you already know I will be one of the people blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning Journey. Its great to have a look on your blog to see all the hard work you put in for 2017.

    We are thrilled that you've registered for the Summer Learning Journey with us. I know it can sometimes be tricky to get started. I have included a link to the week one activities, but remember, you can do them in any order! Check out the activities on our website, and then post your responses to the activities here on your blog site.

    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/week-one

    I am so excited to read all of your posts!

    Cheers,

    Clare

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